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THE DEMON BUREAU - PILOT
A brilliant concept. It is a great setup for conflict, tension, action and character exploration. We easily envision this as
Tension is at its best.
The tone is sinister, chilling, and yet there is a spark of wit and sarcasm that blends well. The pilot is unpredictable and captures the audience’s interest immediately. The structure is divided into a teaser and five act.
When we meet our protagonist, Sam, we are delightfully surprised to learn he is a Priest. The protagonist is likeable , strong, witty, charming, driven, and we root for him. His external goal is clear: find his daughter.
The idea of his daughter missing gives this series a powerful personal touch. His internal conflict and struggle is highlighted. The clever teaming up with a demon is incredibly engaging.
Where have you come from?” “Hell.” There are smart setups and payoffs in both action and dialogue.
In summary, this is a well-crafted TV pilot that comes highly recommended.